The warm breeze quickens;
limbs and leaves toss and flutter.
Fledglings crowd the nest.
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May 28th, 2009 by
From Hays Travelogue- Molly’s CafeLast Saturday, I read with two other poets, Marita and Jake, from my writing group at Molly’s Cafe. Molly is a Canadian who came to Istanbul 12 years ago to teach and direct an English language school. Several years ago, she gave that up and opened a small cafe hear Galata Tower. Whenever you [...] […]
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I wish more persons would take to the Haiku, including myself.
Spring is my favorite season and the new life it brings, I enjoyed your view of it.
Like it!
it hurt like dead man’s calling
Wonderful sense of change through movement here. I like your focus in the last line.
Terrific haiku about my favorites, spring and birds. Thank you for this!
(I really like your blog, too. Clean, crisp, nice headers.)
I like how you remain true to the haiku form (i.e. a nature reference). Good job.
-Nicole
So evocative of spring.
very nice
I love haiku and this one is so well done. So much better than much of the dire stuff out there.
Thanks, everyone, for the comments and feedback. I practice more of this during the summer, haiku and small stones.